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Hey friends,, this is sundar from india..i am little bit of weak in english...can you prepare msc-bioinformatics covering letter for me..??? - cover letter for MBA
Hi there! i am just strugling to draft a nice cover letter for MBA ! your Comments and suggestions would be Apriciated a lot.
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am pleased enough to write about my deep desire to earn MBA degree from internationally reputed University of Calgary. Couple of years ago, I enjoyed building up small company as a hobby, by importing agriculture machinery from Europe. At that time my deliberation was also toward my Bachelor in Business studies from one of the top business institutions in Pakistan. The success of that practical and academic experience at same time gave me a great courage and self confidence in business environment. My hobby became my passion when my peers and coworkers revealed that I had made significant contribution to my family business.
Then a challenging job offer from a multinational brand Coca-Cola gave me a wonderful opportunity to learn from âbig think tanksâ in Coke performing in hostile market. Getting an opportunity working with well known market leader in beverages was my first hand experience in corporate level. My performance and professionalism was highly admired by the management by awarding me the title of âemployee of the yearâ in 2003. Our whole sales distributors were increased from 123 to 144 in just one year. This ultimately contributed 4.97% increase in annual sales. I had an honor to be the youngest in the history of that unit who won the title. My creativity, leadership qualities and significant contribution to respond the market fluctuations timely, were key elements in the achievements of this Coke Award.
I felt myself as flying in the skies for this achievement. This reward not only gave me a great boost and encouragement to fulfill my self-esteem need but also to the thirst of knowledge. The words from my boss added oil to the flame, when he said there is always place empty at the âtopâ. My childhood dream to become top executive can only be fulfilled if get further education, was revealed to me when my education became hurdle to further promotion in that Company. And to accomplish my dream to fill up the empty place at the top I determined to pursue higher education.
The best option in my opinion was to go abroad and get familiarity and exposure of international culture along with the studies. Therefore, I went to Netherlands and earned my Diploma in Human Resource and Quality Management from one of the prestigious institute in Netherlands. I have no words to explain my feelings when my course Coordinator over there recommended my name for a company which was looking for the Position of Human resource Manager. I have honor for being a pioneer in the establishment of Human Resource Department in the Smaak Group of Restaurants B.V Netherlands. It could be very ordinary for some people, but for a âVillage Kidâ belonging to a middle class family from a remote village with very limited resources, was infect incredible achievement. The key duties of jobs were to organize the Hierarchy of management and to provide a structure of internal communication among all the departments and all the chains. This was unexpectedly complex and hard to be done but its matter of great pleasure for me to say that I was amazingly admired by the employer for this success.
My restless nature inspired me once again by reminding the target of my life to be a significant asset of any business entity. But this dream can only be true if I get my higher education along with the experience I already have. I think that by having an MBA degree from this university would really be an added advantage and would also create a spirit of dynamism and leadership qualities from my inner self. So for me MBA is a ladder to be at a position where I can display my vision and contribute at the level of my satisfaction. I believe that you will find, I exhibit intelligence, common sense, initiative, maturity, and stability, and that I am eager to make a positive contribution to your university. I want to enhance my skills and polish my abilities by joining the friendly environment and getting a bright vision from the most cultured and knowledgeable faculty of your university.
This is all I have to say and again I would like to mention that I am desperate to be a part of this friendly and welcoming environment. My background and ambitions after graduating would make you to extend your sympathetic consideration to my appeal. I consider myself the best candidate you are looking for an MBA Program.
For more details I have enclosed my resume which will give you further information about me. I am desperately looking forward to seeing you in the interview and satisfy your queries.
Sincerely,
- Re: Covering Letter >Reasons for Studying<
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The sign off should be
Yours sincerely
not Sincerely yours. - Re: Covering Letter >Reasons for Studying<
Dear Sir: (see if you can find the personâs name)
I am writing to apply for the Master's Degree program in European Comparative Public Policy at University of xxx.
I graduated in communication science in July 2004 from the University of xxx. My degree focuses on political communication and international relations. I also took several courses in politics, which provoked my strong interest in issues that affect European public policy.
European Comparative Public Policy is interesting to study because globalization and European integration are creating an increasingly interdependent and complex set of political, economic, social, and cultural processes. This affects all democratic societies. I am interested in studying the variation in national policy patterns within Europe and the wider OECD area and analysing how the nations' political leaders, government officials, and business executives handle upcoming challenges.
During my last two semesters at the University of Xxx, I worked on an empirical study with main focus on nation images. Moreover, I worked for two years as a student assistant to the chair of Methods of Social Research conducting/âparticipating inâ research. I have a passion for research and am especially interested in further developing my skills in empirical research.
During the summer months 2004 I lived in xxx and seized the opportunity to speak with Prof. Xxx about the Master's Degree program. I also met with xxx, a postgraduate student, who answered my questions from a studentâs point of view. Concerning my special interest in Information Policy I also talked to Prof. Xxx and Prof. yyy. Although Prof. Dr. yyy expects to be on sabbatical leave next year, he has agreed to supervise my work for a research-based 15,000 word dissertation providing my topic falls within the scope of his research interest. Having spoken students and professors, I am excited by my decision to pursue my Masterâs degree.
With a solid foundation in academic theory on public policy and empirical research gained through the Master's Degree program in European Comparative Public Policy at University of xxx, I am confident that I will have the skills, knowledge, and contacts that will enable me to pursue a career as an international policy analyst at a research institution.
Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.
Sincerely yours,
Nadine
I made some subtle changes here and there. Some of the more significant changes are outlined below.
1) You have to watch British and American spelling. For example, analysing versus analyzing.
2) âDuring my last two semesters at the University of Xxx, I worked on an empirical study with main focus on nation images.â
Did you work on or help to complete? I like completing better.
âDuring my last two semesters at the University of Xxx, I helped complete an empirical